Friday, December 27, 2013
Saturday, November 16, 2013
Penumbra II
Penumbra II
“Wut tat tummo” He inhaled with her breath, slowly allowing
his lungs and abdomen to fill. He exhaled with her, lightly gliding his
fingertips over her burnt hair and charred bone. Upon expiration, he tensed his
abdomen from the bottom up letting the lullaby well from deep within himself,
as Kunden had instructed him to do a lifetime ago.
The words were less an articulation of his lips and tongue
and more the result of his breath, will and posture. In this way he was and
instrument and the simple song; his saving grace. This was all he could do
sometimes to calm the baby she dragon.
“Wut tat tummo…Wut tat tummo”
Shilog changed the pacing of melody and enucleated
different vowels to create some variety. He’d already lost perception of time.
In the deep mountain ceremonial chambers the lighting was a luminous jade
emitted from fungi Shilog had never been interested in examining and the
reflection of that light in the pools of dark water Shilog was afraid to
approach.
Slowly, painfully slow Shilog mopped at Tummo’s black hair with
a wet sponge. The water helped to coagulate the plasma that burned her from her
inside, out.
“Wut tat, tummo…wut, tat tummo” Shilog drew out the last
vowel into a hum. Kunden had taught him the tones for the body’s chakras.
Drawing upon his apprenticeship to Edmund Greer, from the life he knew when he
was called Adalgiso Baeri, Shilog could convert each vortex tone into a musical
note. Tummo responded best to C.
Shilog dampened the sponge and squeezed out the excess
before gently placing it back onto her red inflamed skin. The skin had begun to
grow after the plasma cooled enough on her bone and formed blotches of black,
fowl smelling, tar. If he could keep her from scratching at the tar it would
eventually harden into a caprice and fall off with healthy skin beneath.
Shilog had begun months ago with her feet. Shilog would
kneel on a rug in the center of the chamber and stir the water in the buckets
with the sponge. Slowly, Tummo would appear from the recesses of the dark cave.
Shilog would sing through the musical scales being mindful to not linger too
long on any of the tones above the heart (fa). After the first couple of rounds
she’d have a seat on the ground close to Shilog, but never close enough. Shilog
always stifled a smile when he has to comply. After healing her legs and feet
the rest of the work was comparatively easier. She sometimes seemed to enjoy
the grooming. She would balk and grunt, but made no motion to stop him.
To fully lull her to restfulness Shilog began to hum the
melody. It took a better part of the first session before he realized the
coincidence. He spent the remainder of the session in silent awe of his new
found perspective.
“Wut…tat tummo…hmmm-o”
Shilog watched her chest rise and
fall. She was sleeping. He slowly slipped his lap from underneath her large
head. She’d grown since he was last down here three days ago. She’d eaten the
oxen Shilog had left for her in those three days, leaving only charred bone. He
estimated that she must be closer to seven feet by now.
Shilog
winced against the pain his nervous system was reporting from his sleeping legs
and pelvis. He inhaled silently and exhaled sharply through pursed lips has he
thrust his legs straight. Tummo stirred, but did not wake. Shilog twisted and
contorted while the needling sensation moved in waves through his body.
When
he could support his weight without pain, Shilog gently tipped over the
remaining bucket of water allowing it to flow towards Tummo. Her skin gave an
audible hiss, but did not disturb her sleep.
Gathering
his buckets, but leaving the rug Shilog crept towards the steps and mounted the
stairs. On the third landing Shilog looked back to the sleeping monster. He
felt a great pity for her. All she’d known up till now was the suffering of her
own existence. Shilog lowered his head for atonement and prayed for an end to
her suffering. When he was finished he recouped his buckets and again began his
ascent.
Next: Honey and Locust
Penumbra
Penumbra
Mother
knelt before the crew of the Silent Night. He had intended to lead them in
prayer, but could barely bring himself to form a vowel without beginning to
blubber and sob. The Monks had dressed the captain in a white linen shroud and
wouldn’t allow his triorne captain’s hat to be placed on the body. Mother
clutched the filthy hat against his chest and buried his face into it as he
sobbed, smearing his face with filth and sea salt.
The crew
was now crying, although no one pulled against the rope that bound them to the
funeral pyre as a thirty-man pyramid. Each ragged respiration from the crying
crew echoed off the stonewalls of the cavern and were lost, bouncing off into
the vast expanse of the chamber. Some of the monks began to pour oil on the
pyre, the crew and finally themselves before taking a seat on the ground in a
loose circle around the funeral pyre. The remaining monks lit torches and
incense flavoring the air with a could scents Mother had yet to encounter
despite all his travels. The smoke began to irritate Mother’s eyes. He pulled
his kerchief from his neck and wiped away tears and salty filth from his face.
His captain
would be furious if he saw the state of his first mate and his crew. He would
rage and the sea and storm would rage with him. To be dishonored on his wedding
night would shame the soon to be immortal name of the dread pirate; Captain
Abraham. Mother righted himself and took a long pull from the flask of the
captain’s rum that dangled from a rope tied to his belt. He never wanted the
Silent Night nor it’s beastly crew. He had only ever wanted to serve his
beloved captain.
Mother had sailed over every ocean. He had stood on lands
his own mother and father would not have been able to believe if the archangels
themselves sang their praises in the privy. He had only his captain to thank
for that. Mother owed Captain Abraham many debts that could very well extend
beyond this lifetime and he intended to pay as many of those as he could right
now.
Mother clapped together his thick, salt stained hands. His
captain has taught the crew this trick. One clap called for silence two for
prayer. The singular thunderclap echoed off the cavern walls fading into an
unseen distance. Mother’s mind wandered for a split second as it followed the
sound deeper into the mountain sanctuary into recesses that he doubted many of
the monks had ever ventured. The crews had stopped their mourning and were
working to restrain the tide of grief they were feeling. Mother licked his lips and tasted the last of
the captain’s rum. He took a torch from the nearest monk and inhaled gently.
Although, Mother had never led the captain’s dream song, he
knew it well enough. Captain Abraham led the crew with the song in the evening
before supper from the first night after he had the first of his dreams that
eventually lead them here. Mother had felt inspired by the clarity the dreams
had given the captain. He knew where to guide the Silent Night from that point
forth, as easily as he knew the song upon waking.
“Ohm Na
Mo … Chi Va
Ko…Si Ra Saa…” The crew blinked absently at Mother. Maybe they would only
respond to Captain Abraham’s deep rugged voice.
A panic caught Mother. What if the crew were over come by
their passions? The crew of the Silent Night were renown for their demonic
furies thought the seaways. Over come with grief and madness there would be
nothing Mother could do to quell their wild rage. Mother licked his dry lips.
The salt filled his mouth, mixing with whatever rum remained in his saliva. He inhaled
and relaxed into the next verse of the prayer allowing the words to build on
the vibration within his chest, giving the song a nice hum.
“Ar-Hang.
Ka Ru Ni Ko. Shap Pha Sat Ta Nang.”
The monk
standing to Mother’s left began to sing the prayer as well. There was almost a
look of surprise across the monk’s face. Mother couldn’t bother to give it more
than a passing notice. He inhaled deeply and allowed to next verse to come from
deep within his belly.
“Oh Sa Ta.
Tip Pha Man Tang. Pa Pha So.”
The remaing
crew and monks began to sing along filling the cavern with song. The monks
sitting on the floor joined the prayer a moment before the pyre crew began to
stumble through the round. Through tears and ragged breaths, the full chorus of
the captain’s prayer was sung.
Smiles
began to break out on both monk and crew alike. The rounds were flavored by
smiles and the prayer exalted. As the second corus swept into the third, the
monks and sailors were laughing and smiling. They joined hands and began to sway
in unison.
“Na Pai
Tang Vean. Na Vean Ma Ha Kuu. Ey Hi Ma Ma.”
Mother
could feel himself choke up as they neared the end of the song. He would not
allow himself to cry again and noted how bitter the lump in his throat tasted.
Mother swallowed hard and finished the song.
“Na Ah. Na
Wa . Ro Kaa. Pa Ya Ti. Wi Nas Santi.”
Mother
exhaled from his belly, releasing the last line of the prayer.
“Sa Tu No
Pan Te.” A silence seized the chamber almost immediately. Against the
oppressive silence of the moment, Mother forced a whispered prayer from the
captain’s old gods.
“Yit'gadal
v'yit'kadash sh'mei raba. b'al'ma di v'ra khir'utei”
Mother
could not press against the silence anymore than that. He’d never felt a moment
to be so silently demanding before. They had invoked some god or another and it
would not suffer the mumbling of fools any longer.
Mother felt
to monk to his right slip a hand gently under his elbow and begin to guide him
towards the pyre. The remaining monks followed while the remaining crew
maintained a circle behind them.
Mother had
already said goodbye to the crew and fixed his eyes on the captain. Beneath the
shroud the captain’s skin had already accepted a grey and blue hue. His thick
black hair and beard framed a now other-worldly face. Captain Abraham looked
almost peaceful or as peaceful as a thunderbolt could possibly look.
Within a
few steps and before he cold ever possibly be ready, Mother and the monk were
mere cubits from the ring of monks and the pyramid of martyrs. Mother could
smell the salt, sweat, and oil mix with the lavender the monks had used to
covered the captain’s body. Without pomp, Mother tossed his torch into the
kindle. The remaining monks did the same.
The fire
leapt from the ground and sucked the air from Mother’s mouth and momentarily
blinding everyone in the cavern. Mother was flung backward, groping at the air
for purchase he managed to dig his fingernails into the forearm of the monks
beside him. The monk was wild with fear and religious ecstasy, and responded by
grabbing at Mother and clawing at his face. Mother fell to the ground beneath
the wild monk. The remaining crew pulled
the monk from Mother before too much damage was done. They flung him to the
side where he thrashed about and gnashed his teeth. Four monks carried him by
each limb towards the steps carved into the walls of the cavern. The fire had
flared and extinguished itself almost instantly. Later, the crew would swear
they had see all the colors of the rainbow shining out of the funeral pyre
Mother bit
his lip against the pain he felt from the burn he had on the right side of his
face and arm. The monk had clawed away a portion of his left cheek, but the
pain from the burn canceled out any other stimuli. Mother pulled himself to his
knees and looked upon the pyramids of ash that were the remains of the martyrs
and monks. Captain Abraham had taught him to count, to read too, but he
wouldn’t need either of those skills. He knew that the pyre was short one pile
of ash. Where the captain had been laid there was now only a gleaming black
jawbone that looked to have been carved from the same volcanic glass they’d
found from time to time in their journeys. The crew and a monk were pulling Mother to his
feet and helping him towards the long ascent.
The monks
were chattering in their tongue and rushing Mother and the crew up the mountain
steps. Mother and the crew of the Silent Night walked the two hour ascent in
silence. They shuffled through the monastery and out into the snow shower
outside. The monks had erected a small tent city with a large tent in the
center serving as hospital. Mother understood that the crew of the Silent Night
would not be welcome inside ever again and he could feel that they were not
long to over stay their welcome in this shanty town. As soon as they had guides
and the weather broke they would make the journey back to the ship.
Although a
small portion of him yearned to be hurt and confused Mother wouldn’t have it.
He accepted that he was no longer within the protection of his captain. He was
once again a pawn in the ploys of others. Mother layback in the arms of the
monks as they carried him. Above him the stars sway in time with the movement
of the men’s shuffling as they hurried towards the hospital tent. Mother absently
clutched at his chest. He was surprised to find that he still held the
captain’s triorne. Mother pressed it gently against his nose and inhaled the
fading scent of Captain Abraham’s dirty hair. A pained smile started on
Mother’s lips. They would again set sail in a month’s time and search the Night
for a new captain.
Wednesday, November 6, 2013
Sword and Sorcery Study
I guess I should mention it...NSFW
I was thinking that I should probably mention that this blog is pretty NSFW and I'm guessing that you should be at least eighteen to view it. I mean, there is a nude boob floating around out there.
Friday, November 1, 2013
Working out the knots
This is a sketch I made of Tummo as I have been working out her proportions and character. I feel as if I've settled on her hair style and body type. I'd like her to morph a bit as the story develops to give her a bit more of an organic feel in her development. I'll post a polished sketch this weekend for anyone interested.
Wednesday, October 16, 2013
Friday, October 4, 2013
Sunday, September 29, 2013
Friday, September 20, 2013
Thursday, August 29, 2013
I love me some Anthology
I found myself grappling with more limitations, although they were slight this time around and much more difficult to notice. I've always loved anthologies; The Twilight Zone, Outer Limits and whatever that one Speilgberg produced on ABC in the 80's. that being said I've always wanted to do one with the materials that I've produced, hence the re-dedication of this blog to an anthology. I'll hash out the details as it grows, but I've already got a few other stories to add to our Promethium story line.
Enjoy,
Pope
Aug 2013
Monday, August 19, 2013
Finally
I've had to hold off on any posting as I finished up finals, but I'm now free and clear to put some work back into this blog. I've got a lot to say so here we go...
Monday, August 5, 2013
This isn't not an update
I've struggled against the obligation to post something just to be relevant. I've struggled against the obligatory apology I feel I owe the one person who might be checking this blog to see new material. While those ideas have their place and time, this is neither, or it was and I just tricked myself into doing both of those things.
Thursday, July 25, 2013
Wednesday, July 17, 2013
The Process
I am most excited to re-learn the creative process with this project as my vehicle for the experience. For too long I had unknowingly forced myself to submit creatively to any number of phobia pertaining to my work and the eventual acceptance or rejection of said work.
Allowing myself the time and space to create in a fluid manner without self imposed limitation has changed the very way I experience life. I am already indebted to this liberation and I've only just begun.
Tuesday, July 16, 2013
Monday, July 15, 2013
Limiting Myself and Others
It took me about a week to understand why I'd hit a rut so quickly after declaring my intent. I'd set the parameters of this project as loose as I could and then set to conforming them to the idea of the "story". This is exactly what I've wanted to avoid.
I became preoccupied with fleshing out the conflict and relationship the main character would experience and therein the limitations and ends that Narrative places. Within the first two days I'd grounded a story about flight.
It took me about a week to understand why I'd hit a rut so quickly after declaring my intent. I'd set the parameters of this project as loose as I could and then set to conforming them to the idea of the "story". This is exactly what I've wanted to avoid.
I became preoccupied with fleshing out the conflict and relationship the main character would experience and therein the limitations and ends that Narrative places. Within the first two days I'd grounded a story about flight.
Monday, July 8, 2013
Welcome to Beat the dead Man Season Zero. Season Zero is a prequel of sorts to the Kickstarter project that I have been developing for Beat the Dead Man Season One. If I've learned one thing about myself, its that I need a running stat before I take any leaps. Season Zero is it.
I'm looking forward to working without the limitations that I normally place on myself. My hope is that the blog format will enable me to post pages from the comic at my pace with the only limitation being a deadline of at least one posting a week until completion.
My aim for this project is six issues. What we eventually define an issue as is a wholly different idea. Anyway, thanks for checking it out. I hope that we both get something positive out of this endeavor. Thank you for letting me share with you.
Pope
I'm looking forward to working without the limitations that I normally place on myself. My hope is that the blog format will enable me to post pages from the comic at my pace with the only limitation being a deadline of at least one posting a week until completion.
My aim for this project is six issues. What we eventually define an issue as is a wholly different idea. Anyway, thanks for checking it out. I hope that we both get something positive out of this endeavor. Thank you for letting me share with you.
Pope
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